Loom Video Outreach Script

A Blueprint to Sign New Clients. Here are 20 things you could say in a loom.

Loom Video Outreach in Simple Steps.

Open your potential client’s website
Hit record
talk about their homepage
give them solutions.
how you can improve it
how they can make more sales. etc..
Talk for 2-3 minutes
Stop recording.
Send the video to the client.

Why Loom works best

When you send someone a video they are more likely to watch it.
A video holds their attention.

When you send someone a video, they’re far more likely to watch it than read a message. A video instantly feels more personal, authentic, and engaging. You’re not just another name in their inbox—you’re a real person offering genuine help. This creates trust and helps you stand out from dozens of other people pitching the same service.

You can also use the Loom platform, which helps boost your sales through personalized video communication. It’s easy to record, share, and track engagement, making it the perfect outreach tool for freelancers and agencies.

The main thing you need to talk about is the problem or the mistakes that their sales page has

Quick Loom Tips

Keep videos 2–3 minutes long for maximum engagement.
Be confident and natural; don’t sound scripted.
Highlight only 3–5 problems on their page—too many can overwhelm them.
Focus on value rather than technical jargon.
Mention your solution briefly but leave curiosity for a follow-up call.

🦸 Pro Tip: Pick the juiciest part of your service and tease it in your Loom. The goal isn’t to give everything away—it’s to spark curiosity and make them want to know more.

Example Loom Template: 1 Brief Funnel Plan

Hey (name), how is it going? I’ve been consuming your content lately and I really like the XYZ…… So the reason I made this video is because I have a way you can make an additional $10k from your coaching program. I have been doing this for a couple of coaches now, and as I can see from your current funnel… you’re missing out/making XYZ mistake, and this and that. So here’s the plan, you need to fix X and Y, and Z. Once you do that you will get more leads coming in and hence more sales. So if you want me to do it I will.

Example Loom Template 2: Audit plan + CTA

Hey , /personalized line/ My name is . I wanted to make this really quick video to go through your , And give you some feedback on it just because this is something that I do often, So I had some suggestions that I thought you might be able to get some value out of. So one thing I noticed is that could be more effective, Just because in my past experience I found that . So that could be something where you’re missing out on ” So if that’s something you’d be open to talk about, Just let me know and we can have a quick conversation about it.

After the Loom: Be Ready to Onboard Clients Fast

Once you start closing clients from your Loom outreach, make sure your onboarding process looks professional and organized. A great first impression doesn’t stop with your video—it continues with how smoothly you onboard your clients.

You can use Starrayto’s Client Onboarding Templates to streamline your workflow and keep everything structured from the first meeting to project kickoff. These templates help you send clear proposals, collect client details, and establish timelines effortlessly.

And when it’s time to bill your clients, try our Free Invoice Generator. It lets you create professional, downloadable invoices in seconds—no design skills or complicated tools needed. Both of these resources will help you look more professional and save time so you can focus on getting results for your clients.

Final Thoughts

If you send personalized Loom videos like these to even 100 qualified prospects, you’re bound to close a few deals—provided your offer is solid. Personalized outreach still works, but video takes it a step further by building instant trust and authority.

Start today: pick your top 10 prospects, record short Looms for each, and send them out. You’ll be surprised how quickly this strategy can fill your calendar with client calls and opportunities.